Illustration of a boat caught in a dangerous thunderstorm at sea
Illustration by Allan Davey

The Storm

What will be left when the skies clear?

By Rebecca E.F. Barone
From the October 2023 Issue

Learning Objective: to analyze conflict in a work of short fiction, then continue the narrative in a sequel

Lexile: 680L
SPOTLIGHT ON: CONFLICT

In literature, conflict is a struggle between two opposing forces. What conflicts are present in this story?

 

Hint: There is more than one!

“I can’t see land !” Noah shouted over the wind. My best friend went pale as the gusts blew stronger.

The storm had blown in fast. It wasn’t supposed to arrive for another two hours. But the clouds, dark and glowering, hadn’t paid attention to the forecast. Now we were out on the turbulent waters—alone.

Noah and I had been inseparable since kindergarten. We’d sat together for lunch hundreds of times. We’d made a zillion dioramas and posters together. There had been campouts in each other’s basements and hot summer days at the pool. And of course there was sailing—there was nothing we’d liked better than racing around the lake.

That was before. Everything was different now. Suddenly, basketball was cooler than me. At lunch, Noah sat with the team. He did his school projects with them. We hadn’t had a fight, but these days Noah and I barely spoke.

Still, when I suggested a quick sail around the lake, Noah had answered with a smile. And so we set off for one more trip out together. One more morning, just Noah and me. One more time on the water before school and teams and new friends led us apart again.

Then the storm blew in.

Noah was holding a small crumpled sail in his arms. I had watched as he pulled it down from the front of our boat, grabbing handfuls of the heavy cloth. Even with one sail down, though, we were still going too fast.

The wide main sail over our heads bit into the storm, grasping the wind’s power, sending us racing forward and pushing the side of the boat ever closer to the water. It was all I could do to steer—to hold on to the tiller that threatened to wrench itself from my hands. If I let go, I would lose control of the boat.

“Stow it!” I shouted. Noah pushed the heap of useless sailcloth under the deck.

“No one knows where we are,” Noah yelled.

How could such a loud voice sound so fearful?

“We’ll make it home!” I called back, hoping my voice sounded encouraging.

Land should’ve been in sight by now. Was I pointing us in the wrong direction? My arms screamed. I couldn’t hold the tiller much longer.

“It has to come down,” I cried, staring up at the giant sail above us.

Through the now blinding sheets of rain, I saw Noah point up at the sail. He understood.

He stood up just as a giant swell rose in front of us—bigger than anything we’d been through yet. The boat rose up on the wave and crashed down the other side. Noah fell, hitting the floor of the boat with a thunk so sickeningly loud, I heard it over the wind and waves.

The basketball team disappeared from my mind. The missed lunches vanished. The hurt, the sadness, the emptiness left behind from our fading friendship were whipped away on the wind. All that mattered was my friend in a heap on the bottom of the boat.

Slowly, Noah sat up, clutching his head. When he took his hand down, blood ran in a red stream that the driving rain could not wash away. For a moment, he sat staring at his hand. Then he moved it slowly back to his head.

He looked up.

The sail was still stretched taut and angry.

“I can do it,” he shouted, looking back at me.

I wished I could tell him to sit, to take care of his head. But we weren’t going to make it with the sail still full, and if I let go of the tiller, we’d be crushed by the waves.

Noah got up. His feet seemed unsure, tripping where they used to be steady. Twice he raised his hand to his head.

Somehow, he made it all the way forward. I tore my eyes away from the roiling waters to watch as he loosened the knots. Inch by inch, he brought the sail down until only a small space of canvas was left. We slowed for the first time in many minutes.

Wind beat the stinging rain into my cheeks. Noah came to sit next to me. We grasped hands, unsure of what else to do.

Then, out of the gray that never seemed to end . . .

“Emma!” Noah’s whisper carried through the storm.

Together, we saw it in the distance.

Light.

Land.

Home. 

Icon of a lightbulb

Writing Prompt

Write a sequel that takes place on Emma and Noah’s first day back at school. How does what happened on the boat affect their relationship? 

This story was originally published in the October 2023 issue.

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Step-by-Step Lesson Plan

Close Reading, Critical Thinking, Skill Building

Essential Questions: How do we build and maintain relationships? How are conflicts resolved? What are the qualities of a good friend?

1. PREPARE TO READ (15 MINUTES)

Do Now: Journal (5 minutes)

  • Project the following on your whiteboard for students to respond to in their writing journals or on a sheet of paper: 

Choose one of the prompts about friendship below.

Why are friends important?

What makes someone a good friend?

Do you have any friendships that are outside of your usual friend group? How do you manage to balance your friendships?

What was the last disagreement or conflict you had with a friend? How did you handle it? Is there anything you would do differently now if you could?

  • Invite volunteers to share their responses.

Preview Vocabulary (10 minutes)

  • Project the Google Slides version of Vocabulary Definitions and Practice on your whiteboard. Review the definitions and complete the activity as a class. Highlighted words: glowering, roiling, stow, swell, taut, tiller. Audio pronunciations of the words and a read-aloud of the definitions are embedded on the slides. Optionally, print the PDF version or share the slideshow link directly to your LMS and have students preview the words and complete the activity independently before class.

2. READ AND DISCUSS (45 MINUTES)

  • Read the “Spotlight On” box on page 28 or at the top of the digital story page.
  • For students’ first read, have them follow along as they listen to the audio read-aloud, located in the Resources tab in Teacher View and at the top of the story page in Student View.
  • Have students reread and annotate the story independently. Here are some symbols you might have them use:

 ∞ = connection

⭐ = important

❓ = I don’t understand

💭 = “I’m thinking . . .” (add words and comments)

💙 = love this

  • Alternatively, have students complete a double-entry journal during their reread. In their journals or on a piece of paper, have students create a T-chart. In the left-hand column, have them record three to five lines that jump out at them or feel particularly meaningful. In the right-hand column, have them record their reactions to these lines through questions, comments, connections, or analysis. (You can find both a print and digital version of our Double-Entry Journal handout in the Resources tab.) 
  • Divide students into groups to discuss their annotations or double-entry journals. Then reconvene as a whole group and pose the following questions, some of which may draw on students’ reading responses and group discussions. (If you prefer to have students answer these questions in writing, use the Discussion Questions activity in the Resources tab.)

Discussion Questions (30 minutes)

  • How has Noah and Emma’s friendship changed recently? How do each of them feel about their changing relationship? Emma and Noah have been the best of friends since kindergarten. Now that they are older, Noah is playing basketball and doesn’t devote as much time or attention to their friendship. Emma feels like Noah sees his new hobby and friends as “cooler” than she is, and this makes her feel sad and dejected. We don’t know exactly how Noah feels about his changing friendship with Emma, because the story is told in first person, from Emma’s point of view. We can infer from his smiling acceptance of Emma’s invitation to go out on the lake that he still values their friendship and enjoys spending time with Emma.
  • Scavenger Hunt! Find at least three examples of personification (a literary device in which the author gives human characteristics to something that is not human). What is being personified in the examples you found? Place parentheses around it. Then underline the human characteristics it has been given. Possible answers: “But the (clouds), dark and glowering, hadn’t paid attention to the forecast”; “The wide main (sail) over our heads bit into the storm, grasping the wind’s power . . . ”; “It was all I could do to steer—to hold on to the (tiller) that threatened to wrench itself from my hands”; “My (arms) screamed”; “The (sail) was still stretched taut and angry”; “(Wind) beat the stinging rain into my cheeks.”
  • Consider the examples of personification you found in Question 2. What does the author’s use of personification help readers understand? What element of the story does it develop (e.g., character, conflict, plot, setting)? The personification helps readers understand how powerful, violent, and dangerous the forces of nature in the story are. It helps readers visualize what’s happening, and makes it feel as if the wind and the boat are characters in the story that Emma and Noah are struggling against. The author’s use of personification develops the setting and the external conflict Emma and Noah face.
  • Reread the lines of dialogue. What’s interesting about the last line of dialogue in the story? How does it change the story’s mood? The story begins with the line “‘I can’t see land!’ Noah shouted over the wind.” Throughout the story, every line of dialogue is “shouted,” “called,” or “cried.” The final line of dialogue—“‘Emma!’ Noah’s whisper carried through the storm”—is said softly and changes the mood. Readers feel a sense of calm and hope along with Emma and Noah. 
  • Analyze the story’s title and tagline. The title and tagline refer to the literal storm that Emma and Noah are caught in on the lake and whether they will make it through it alive and unharmed. It might also refer to the storm in their friendship and the question of whether it will survive.
  • Do you think anything will change in Noah and Emma’s friendship after the storm? Answers will vary.

3. WRITE ABOUT IT: CONFLICT (60 MINUTES)

  • Have students complete the Featured Skill Activity: Conflict, available in the Resources tab, which will guide students to explore types of conflict in literature and conflicts present in the story. This activity prepares them to respond to the writing prompt on page 29 in the printed magazine and at the bottom of the digital story page:

Write a sequel that takes place on Emma and Noah’s first day back at school. How does what happened on the boat affect their relationship?

You may also have students use the Narrative Writing Planner, in the Resources tab, for help brainstorming and organizing their sequels.

  • Alternatively, have students choose a task from the Choice Board, a menu of alternate culminating tasks. (Our Choice Board options include the writing prompt from the magazine, differentiated versions of the writing prompt, and additional creative ways for students to demonstrate their understanding of a story or an article.)

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